Re: [寫作班]azure0116, Christmas

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※ 引述《azure0116 (衝阿.炫風衝峰)》之銘言： : I began to remember the old memory about my first love. recollect : Acctually she didnt love me as I love her. Like my father said," didn't did. : the things in the world you can't acquire always tempt you get : most."I guess it's a kind of the human natures. X nature : In 2000, December 24, I was the second grade of my On December 24th,2000, in (my去除) (建議日期+th) : junior high school. There's a beautiful girl sat in front of was sitting : me,I having been caring for her for months. Since December 24 and I had : was the last chace for me to ask her out, I decided that I must chance : try my atmost to ask for dating her. At the moon break finally I ????? : courageously asked her out. She accept my invitation. At the accepted : moment I felt an overwhelming joy first appeared in my life. appearing : We met at the Taipei MRT station first. I took her to my : favorite restaurant. Then we went to 淡水 to enjoy the beauteous : sunset. I really knew of your kindness because seeing you bought her?? when her buy : a 愛心鉛筆. We had a good time at that day. When I said good bye on : to her in my mind I decided to ask her out again, fantasizing 加逗號 imagining (fantasize:to imagine you are doing something which is very unlikely to happen) : that in the process of time we may become a couple. we may become a couple in the future. : Unluckily, fortune doesnt smiles on me. She didnt care for me However doesn't smile didn't like : as I did. We could only be friend. The thing intenses my friends.What adding to the : suffering was our photographic momery on Cristmas. photographs Christmas Eve. : Although many years passed by, I still missed the girl. : I was ambivalent about a loveless lover on every : Christmas,missing her terribly, remembering her cruelty, recollecting +and : thinking about that she flashed the first smile at me in my : life. : *---------------------- : 以下為疑惑^^ : 有些逗號+動名詞是用分詞構句@@ 不知道用的對不對! : (約xxx出來只能用 ask XX out 嗎?) : 愛心鉛筆不知道怎麼拼 (那種台北車站附近路上一直叫你買的) charity pencil? I'm not sure. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 60.250.197.203