Re: [寫作班] 托福第四週-physheepy-1

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者jennyQ (fitness)時間16年前 (2008/03/16 01:09)推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)

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some suggestions ^^ ※ 引述《physheepy ()》之銘言： : 1. It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built : in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? : Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. : I support the plan of building a new restaurant in my neighborhood. : There are few restaurants in the visinity of my apartment. Almost all of vicinity : them provide food of poor quality and are expensive. Everytime I want some poor quality food ..I don't exactly know isn't it right to write that as your version. Besides, Every time should be fell apart. : cheap and delicious food, I must go to a far region to buy that. If there will : be a new restaurant, I'll be very happy. : First, more restaurants offer more choices to customers. Even the most ^ there could (make it easy to understand ^^) : delicious foods can't content customers if there is no variety. Having the you mean...if foods are not various? : same food every meal is boring and tiresome. Sometimes I want some healthy : food and sometimes I would like to have some spicy food if I don't have a : good appetite. For example, I love pizzas very much. It's good to have a : pizza once a month, nevertheless, I never want to eat pizzas everyday. ; : Consuming a variety of food is also good for our health because it could : provide different kinds of nutrition. : The second advantage is that competition makes improvment. The restaurants : in my neighborhood are expensive and the clerks are usually very arrogant, ^^^^^sell ^food ; : however, there are still a lot of customers because they don't have many : choices. If there are some new retaurants, they should compete with each would : other to attract the customers and raise the quality of both the service and : the products. : I really look forward to a new restaurant in my neighborhood. If there is : a new one built here, I can't wait to go having a meal. There are few things I can do for you. ^^" I'm glad to see someone else write the same topic as mine. I like your view in commerce and health. You thought more than I did. ^^ Let us improve our writings. <(*￣︶￣*)╯ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 211.74.178.17 ※ 編輯: jennyQ 來自: 211.74.178.17 (03/16 01:09) ※ 編輯: jennyQ 來自: 211.74.178.17 (03/16 01:10) ※ 編輯: jennyQ 來自: 211.74.182.201 (03/16 10:57)