Re: [寫作班] 托福第六週 JennyQ-2

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※ 引述《jennyQ (天天天天天天天天天天兵)》之銘言： : 2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should : sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific : reasons and examples to support your answer. : I disagree that people should sometimes do things that they do not : enjoy doing. Doing things against one's will is annoying, repugnant, : and even torturous. : Sometimes we may have to do things we don't want to do. What I want : to state is that we should change our mind, attitude, and more clearly, : emotion toward the motivation of what we do. People study hard for : knowledge, and knowledge is for improving human life. People work ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ *I think it's better to use a more active tone (like the next sentence), and say that "knowledge helps us improve human lives." : day-and-night for living, and various industries provide us all we need. ^a : Neither studying nor working is an easy thing. People struggle for : freedom, for democracy, and for human rights. There are absolutely far : more difficult things, through the processes they may get hurt, or even ^of which : die. However, they fought to the last second even if they were bleeding. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Present tense -> past tense? *There are 2 things you can do here, (1) use the present tense from here to the end of the paragraph, if you want to write more generally; or (2) add a sentence indicating that you're now talking about certain people in history who have made sacrifices, etc. (It would be even better if you gave examples, too.) : The inteinsion of leading a better life made them firmly believe they intention : should do those torturous fightings. : Knowing what is the most important goal should be achieved and xx *verb after noun here: ^^^^^^^^^ : learning having a positive attitude to it is the way how we do to have xxxxx ^^^^^^^^^^^ *redundant; keep either "the way" or "how" : dislikeful things without complaints. dislikable* *To be dislikeful means to be full of dislike, i.e. to dislike many things. : It is just like daily triffles we can not ignore purposely. trifles : As long as we are determined and believe finally we will succeed, ^^^^^^^ it might be better to use (that + ) "eventually" or "in the end" : there is nothing we can not do it with joy. xx -- 一個學術英文寫作領域的討論板在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉【分組討論區】 --> 11 國家研究院政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 99.231.10.180