Re: [寫作班] 托福第13週 philJamy, 4

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I appreciate your masterpiece! some suggestions. ※ 引述《philJamy (Jamy)》之銘言： : : 4. Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others : : prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, : : work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to : : support your choice. : I'd rather work in a company of mine than be a employee. With plentyful : passion and energy, I believe that running a complany enables me economical : freedom, which is what I've been long for. Though it may be tough and : painstaking to establish a company, I would like to go all out for my goal. : To me, working for an emplyer is easier, and lacking of challenge, though. as lacks or lacking in ^s pl. : I may not need to take so much responsibilities as the chairman. Instead, : the managers will tell me what to do, and all I have to do is following the : directions. It's comfortable, but never a life I want to live. However old I : am, I wish that I could possess unlimited eagerness to learn and to achieve. : Compared with the life as an empolyee, life as a chairman can be challenging : and achieving. : Besides, owning my business creates possibility to be ecnomically free. : An employee could hardly earn much extra income, no matter how hard he works. : One could work for eight extra hours a day, without increasing the salary a : bit. However, a chairman of a company could increase his asset dramatically in a : short time, depending on how the company works. He doesn't even have to work : for so long as the worker do, while he is stiil a rich man.A rich and free ^s pl. : man! Again, the contrast between an employer and an employee seems explicit. : Though so many people study and work so hard just to get a nice job, which : implies that working for others, I am clear about what I want-- being a wealthy : and free man. Owning a company is a realistic way to realize my dream. : ※ 編輯: philJamy 來自: 59.115.148.141 (06/10 18:36) GJ! no big prob. Hope that I could do little help for you. ^^ We can discuss. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 211.74.176.154