Re: [寫作班] 托福第13週 Xinlong 4
※ 引述《philJamy (Jamy)》之銘言：
: Welcome :)
: I appreciate your ways of thinking.
Thanks :)
: However, I have some difficulty understanding ur essay.
: Here are two things u may notice:
: 1.Structure
: When u write an essay, u should have at least an introduction paragraph,
: body paragraph(s), and an conclusion paragraph so that the readers can
: understand ur statement easily.
You means, when I explain my statement, I should have an introduction, like
"I'd like working for an employer.", then I need an conclusion, but I didn't.
Right?
: 2. language use
: I suggest that when u memorize vocabulary, u know how the words are used.
: Take ur first sentence for example, "I'd like to" should be in front of
: "to V." Knowing how to use a word corretly is important, too.
You means, I lost the word "to" after "I'd like", and I have many mistaken
that about use language. Right?
I should study hard to catch up every body.
Thank you ver much.
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