[寫作班] 托福第14週 Xinlong 1

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者 (冰狩)時間16年前 (2008/06/21 13:38), 編輯推噓5(505)
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※ 引述《dvlin (Dee)》之銘言: : Choose one of the following topics. : 1. Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy : them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and : examples to support your opinion. I prefer a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings than destroy them and replace them with modern buildings, Even the cost of keeping will be more expensive then to destroy and replace them. I think keep the historic buildings will give us or ours children more benefit then destroy and replace them with modern buildings. The historic buildings are indicator of city, keep original face of city and blend with another old buildings. Those buildings are taught us or ours children its history, let us or ours children learned and understand what its buildings happened. If destroy them and replace them with modern buildings, the towering buildings are too sharp to congruous with the other. If two building as close as each other, one of those is a historic building, another is a modren building, I don't think historic building is better then modren building, because both building have characteristic by themselves. So, we can't abandon one of them. Maybe living in a modren building will be more comfortable then a old building, but the historic building is necessary in a city. If we can keep it, we should do it. Not only can we learn history about it like virtu, but also acquire that historic buildings is human cultural heritage. -- Have a nice day. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.217.246.66 ※ 編輯: Xinlong 來自: 59.117.97.63 (06/22 21:20) ※ 編輯: Xinlong 來自: 59.117.97.63 (06/22 21:20)

06/23 12:25, , 1F
then or than? please recheck the spellings. ^^
06/23 12:25, 1F

06/23 12:29, , 2F
last paragraph: in "a" city. Not only CAN WE.....
06/23 12:29, 2F

06/23 12:32, , 3F
注意倒裝句文法,對等連接詞用法需一致,最後一句錯了
06/23 12:32, 3F

06/23 12:33, , 4F
注意倒裝句文法,另外對等連接詞用法需一致,最後一句錯了
06/23 12:33, 4F
Excuse me, could you tell me more? ※ 編輯: Xinlong 來自: 163.13.246.135 (06/23 13:51)

06/23 20:15, , 5F
最後一句想表達什麼呢?可以練習用英文思考來寫作較流暢喔
06/23 20:15, 5F

06/23 20:15, , 6F
Not only can we learn history from historic buildings
06/23 20:15, 6F

06/23 20:24, , 7F
, but also acquire that historic buildings are human
06/23 20:24, 7F

06/23 20:25, , 8F
cultural heritage. not only but also是對等連接詞
06/23 20:25, 8F
I just want ask why is use"can we", not "we can". Thanks ※ 編輯: Xinlong 來自: 61.217.246.66 (06/23 23:37)

06/23 23:57, , 9F
因為否定詞置句首必須倒裝 BTW, want "to", "why I should
06/23 23:57, 9F

06/23 23:57, , 10F
use"
06/23 23:57, 10F
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