[寫作班] 托福第18週 nozomii, 1

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※ 引述《dvlin (Dee)》之銘言: : Choose one of the following topics. : 1. A foreign visitor has only one day in your country. Where should this : visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to : support your choice. In my opinion, I think the foreign visitor should go to Mountain A-Li. Since this visitor can only stay in Taiwan for one day, he or she has to go to a place that can represent the image of Taiwan most clearly and show the most beautiful part of Taiwan. There is the schedule I made to represent the best parts of Mountain A-Li to support my recommendation. First, starting from morning, you can take the special train which was once built for transporting timber to see the most spectacular sun-rising and have a good starting of this trip. Then, you can walk on the path in the forest which is famous of divine trees to recover the stressful nerves and relax your whole body. After the long walking, you can choose to find a restaurant to have an aboriginal meal for lunch and watch the exotic shows which are performed by the aborigine of Taiwan. In the afternoon, you can watch the flowers. No matter which season you come, there are always different kinds of flower blossom waiting for you. On the other hand, you can also enjoy the Taiwanese tea here and take some rest on the green. During the night, you can watch the twinkle stars and feel the comfortable wind blows on your face, take you to dream to end the day. On the whole, Mountain A-Li is a place that you can spend one day from morning to night to feel the different type of beauty at one time in Taiwan. Since Taiwan is famous of its breathtaking views of the mountains, Mountain A-Li is the must visit spot to see the gorgeous views. Someone may suggest that there are more mountains which are worth to see. But in my opinion, since the visitor has only one day in Taiwan, it is important to use the time efficiently and see the most aspects of Taiwan as possible. Therefore, Mountain A-Li is the only spot that you can do the most different kinds of activities in the same place without wasting the time on transportation, and enjoy the every time period of one day in Taiwan. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.112.228.100 ※ 編輯: nozomii 來自: 140.112.228.100 (08/11 00:16)

08/11 22:52, , 1F
he or she=> 看是要用he/she/they 整篇文章一致即可
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08/11 22:54, , 2F
Here is the schedule / he can(not you)
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08/11 22:55, , 3F
Some may argue that/
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08/11 22:56, , 4F
introduction 和conclusion的長度和內容可以做調整
08/11 22:56, 4F
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