Re: [寫作班] 托福第17週 nozomii,4
※ 引述《nozomii (nozomi)》之銘言:
:   In my opinion, I do not think that modern technology is creating a single
: culture. In contrast, I think that we can find out more different kinds of
: cultures because of the modern technology. There are some reasons to support
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: my opinion.
:   First, through the development of modern technology, we can use more and
: more devices to experience this beautiful world. For example, thanks of
                                                                       to
: the Internet and the digital cameras, when we travel the world we can take
                                                                ,
: the pictures and upload them on the website to show the unique and
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: beautiful cultures and views we saw. Therefore, we tell people that there
                                 've seen (*present tense here)
: are some different cultures from what we are familiar with and we need to
: respect and preserve them.
:   Second, modern technology brings enormous information and knowledge
: to us. Because we learn more knowledge and know how to show our respect
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: and try hard to protect the different cultures through the information,
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: the different cultures can be preserved.
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:   In conclusion, I disagress with that modern technology is creating a
                     disagree
: single world culture. I think that thanks of the modern technology we do
                                            to                      ,
: know there are still a lot of beautiful and unique cultures which need our
: respect and preservation. Therefore, thanks of the help of modern technology
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: we can create a diversified and beautiful modern world.
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