Re: [寫作班] 托福第17週 soundspeed,5
※ 引述《soundspeed (myway)》之銘言:
: Basically, the Internet was created as a platform for information exchange
: and experience sharing. People could convey knowledge faster than ever before
: through this media. So, the issue may not be the Internet itself but probably
medium*
*medium (singular) -> media (plural)
: depends on how people make use of this technology. If someone spreads
: inappropriate message, like pornographs, it’s the person to be criticized,
messages pornography
: not the Internet. As a result, I would support the viewpoint that the
: Internet is a really practical tool for modern people in this competitive
: world. Following explains why I favor this powerful tool in our daily life.
^The
: At the very beginning, as we could recall around late 90’s, the Internet
: only provided simple access, like rough website introducing specific
websites
: information, maybe educational or commercial. It was really inconvenient to
: search information meeting personal requirement, since we had to memorize a
^for
: long address before we reach the page. Later, a new concept was realized,
^could :
: searching engines, which almost dominate our everyday life now. Originally,
: this invention was designed to link pages. Somehow, they become stronger and
became
: stronger to connect our life. The most famous example is Google, which
: provides key-word website search, classification of pictures, and now even
keyword (or "key word", without the hyphen)
: satellite pictures of your house! In addition, abundant online resources
: serve you to shopping online, meeting with your friends, and sharing your
: pictures or feelings on your own blog.
: Besides fulfilling our life with countless and practical messages, the
: Internet also support us a brand-new platform we’ve never seen before,
provides us with a brand-new...
: wikipedia. It’s an innovation could possibly replace old, heavy, and
W (capitalization) ^which/that
: inflexible encyclopedia in the library. The most attractive feature of
: wikipedia is that every piece on the website could be edited by anyone who is
W
: interested in this field. Although not definitely accurate sometimes, it
: promises the newest update of knowledge.
: To sum up, nowadays the Internet links almost everything in our daily life.
: Both virtual information and real commodities are available on this platform.
made available through
this platform
: Also, as the Internet evolves with new ideas, knowledge could be spread even
: faster and more convenient, just like what wikipedia is supposed to do.
conveniently
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