Re: [寫作班] 托福第20週 ypyp, 2

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※ 引述《ypyp (牙周病)》之銘言： : 2. People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of : modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do : you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and : examples in your answer. : To escape stress and difficulties in life, I think the best way is to : plan an effective and workable schedule. Of course good recreational , : activities can help people relax and temporarily forget their difficulties; : however, finally these difficulties are unavoidable. With a good schedule can xxxxxxx xxxx A : smooth over my stress much better than any other recreational activities. : I have a lot of interests, such as reading, singing, origami, sports, : etc. However, none of them can really make me relax without a thoughtful : schedule. For me, it is important to face all tasks I have at once. I always : list all my tasks down, check their priorities and give each a proper : proportion of time and effort to finish it. It is important for me to know : how much time and resource I have, after checking these information I can do . After , : my interested recreational activities without worrying about wasting too much : time. Only in such way I can really escape the stress. ^a ^^^^^^* *I think your method can be very effective because it does more than merely "escaping" stress; rather, it takes excess stress away from the beginning. I suggest you rewrite the last sentence this way: "This way, not only do I escape stress, I avoid having too much stress in the first place." : It may sound a little too serious; some might say that sometimes all we : need is to leave the hard situation we faced. When I was in high school, I face : ever thought that as well. I skipped classes and went to play volleyball or had thought : bridge games, just hoped to forget the stress due to heavy class-work. Did I hoping : really relax? Not at all! When I did these recreational activities, I can not : forget those had not been done. The result was: I had neither finished my that work (singular) : work nor got fun or release. Thus, I finally found that only a well-planned ^^^^^^^("relief" might be a better phrase here) : schedule can really make me feel relaxed and enjoy what I interested. was interested in. : In sum, although planning an effective schedule seems not so intuitive : for escaping stress and difficulties, it does the best way for me, and I ^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ as a means/method of "it does the best for me" or "it is the best way for me" or "it proves to be the best way for me" : believe that it is also a very good policy for those busy in modern life. Interesting idea backed by a great example! -- 一個學術英文寫作領域的討論板在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉【分組討論區】 --> 11 國家研究院政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 70.79.36.70