Re: [寫作班] 托福第39週 (muffinman, 2)

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者 (Dee)時間15年前 (2009/07/29 05:26), 編輯推噓2(200)
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※ 引述《muffinman (薑餅人)》之銘言: : : 2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has : : destroyed communication among friends and family. : I agree that Television has destroyed the communication among friends and xxx : family. Television was invented in the beginning of the 20 Century and 20th : became thrived after the technological improvements. Over time, it has xxxxxx : played a great role in our lives. : To be concerned over TV’s effects on our daily life, it’s essential that : we pay heed to TV’s functions. First of all, the news has accounted for xxx : a large part of the programs. People who used to chat with one another to programming : get news and read news in newspaper now turn to the TVs. As a result, : there seem to be an increasing lack of communication as people are unable : to share their views of the same piece of news immediately. Good point! Are we seeing a revival of topical communication via social news websites? : Furthermore, film channel became a major part of the TV programs. ^s : Consequently, going to a movie with friends is not the priority in their a : leisure time. More and more people prefer to stay at home rather than hang : out with friends since there might be an appealing concert on the TV. : Being at home watching movies alone become prevailing. Thus, without a becomes (or has become) : doubt, it is hard to find something common to discuss. Slightly weak point -- moviegoers generally are not encouraged to talk while in the theater, and they usually have a few hours at most to comment on and discuss the film immediately afterwards. On the other hand, TV dramas have a much larger total viewership, and every week they give fans new materials to chat about at work or after work. : What’s more, the entertaining, attractive TV shows become dispensable for : most of the families. The TV shows are so alluring that they spend their : time sitting in front of the screen instead of paying attention to each : other. The dinner time which used to be family time was taken place by : TV-watching. So, it is not surprising that generation gap become larger; has become : in the mean while, the relationship between parents and youth become worse. xxxxxx meanwhile (one word), or "in the mean time," : To sum up, the domination of TV has brought us immense impacts, especially dominance The "domination of TV" implies that it is we who have dominated the TV, whereas the "dominance of TV" indicates the TV is dominant in our lives! : on communication. What we should do is walking out of the door, interacting : more with our friends, family and the people who care about you. In that : case, the ill effects of TV should decrease. -- 一個 學術英文寫作 領域的討論板 在 PTT (telnet:ptt.cc〉 【 分組討論區 】 --> 11 國家研究院 政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 24.83.235.248

07/29 11:05, , 1F
oh~~ thanx for your corrections!!
07/29 11:05, 1F

07/29 12:28, , 2F
嗚嗚~~~為什麼都沒人願意幫我改....
07/29 12:28, 2F
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