Re: [寫作班] 托福第42週 (vinneko)

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者dipin (吃喝玩樂滿天下)時間15年前 (2009/08/29 13:05)推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)

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※ 引述《Vinneko (OD)》之銘言： : 1. A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do : you think this person would like and dislike about living in your : town or city? Why? : The first thing the person who move in Taipei would like is : that he would find it is very convenience living here. The convenience : stores are so many that one can always find them in 500 meters around : wherever we are. Besides, the tranportation systems are convenience, too. : There are handreds of kinds of bus in Taipei, we can go almost everywhere hundreds 這邊好多of阿請問大大如果要保留原意，要怎麼改比較好呢？可以寫成 hundred kinds of bus 嗎？ : by taking the bus. Moreover, by taking the Mass Rapid Transportation(MRT) by taking bus (?可嗎只是覺得the 在這邊有點多) : system, one can go to their destinations faster. 台北捷運網站上寫的是 "mass rapid transit system" 不過我也覺得可以用transportation : However, the living environment is very crowded in Taipei city, and : one have to suffer the corwdness in the public transportations during rush : rush hours. Another thing is that the pace of daily life in the city is rush. 好多rush 既然前面已經用rush 後面我想是不是改用 quick or very fast 之類的呢？ : Therefore, one might notice that the traffic is dangerous in the city : because people are always rushing for something without taking care of others. : Another advantage of living in Taipei city is that most of the people : are friendly here. Wherever one get lost or have problems, people around : are always willing to help even though he is a stranger for them. : However, one might find that the quality of serveice in most of the : stores are not good enough compare to those in western society. For example, 是不是要用comparing 比較好？可以避免一個句子兩個動詞，而無連接詞。 : a taxi driver helping the clients to load their packages into the car is : common in western world, which is not that common in Taipei. : To sum, there are plenty of advantages to live in the Taipei city. : However, there are still some disadvantges unacceptable for some people. : Nevertheless, I think Taipei is a good city which is always open for those : want to move in . 英文作文每段開頭是不是不用空很多格呢？如果真的要空，空幾格比較適合呢？ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.56.137.23 ※ 編輯: dipin 來自: 61.56.137.23 (08/29 13:06)