Re: [寫作班] 托福第47週 hsnudrum, 3

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※ 引述《hsnudrum (寶寶加油喔!:))》之銘言： : Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather all year : long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times : a year. Which do you prefer? : Although there are many people, especially who live in tropical zone, think ^^^^^^^^ xxxxxxxxx ^those ^the : it would be better to live in the places that have the same wether all year weather : long. However, I prefer to live in where it has different wether in a year. ^^^^^^^^^^ 有兩個重複的問題可以說"there are many people... who think"，或"many people... think"就好再來"Although many people..., I prefer"跟"Many people.... However, I..." although跟however兩個只能選一個注意逗號與句號的差別第二句的中間句號改成分號更好 : Here is why. : First and foremost, I love to participate in different activities in different : seasons. For example, I would like to go ice skiing or to enjoy hot spring : in winter; do some water activities like surfing in summer; go mountain : traveling and biking in spring and fall. As living in the subtropical region, xx L ^^^^ : where does not have obvious difference between seasons, I always eager to there is no ^am ^^^ 這句可以用"Living in the subtropical region, (where there is...,) I..."句型因為I am living in [some location] 所以可以說 Living in [some location], I 不需要加As在前面 : experience snowing in winter. I recall that once I went to America with my : friends in the winter of 2006, we had a lot of fun in playing snowboard in snowboarding : Denver. : Another important reason is that I can have different styles of clothing when : living under seasons. I can wear my favorite T-shirts and short pants in : summer, and wear beautiful sweaters and scarfs in winter. With different : clothing styles, I could develop different feelings and ideas in my life, : furthermore, I could develop my views of appreciating beauty. The most . F ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aesthetic sense or sense of aesthetics : typical example is that the world's greatest cloth designers always hold fashion designers : their clothing exhibitions in the most modern and fashion cities fashionable(形容詞) : like Toyko, Paris and New York, which all have different seasons in years. : Admittedly, some people who prefer to live in where its wethers are all the : same would hold the opinions the advantages of convenience. For example, you : don't have to worry about how to wear or to take the risk of getting a cold : under abruptly change of wether. However, for the reasons mentioned above, : I still would like to have different wethers in a year. correct spelling: "weather", several places Good, clear argument. Good organization. Excellent use of anecdotal example! -- 一個學術英文寫作領域的討論板在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉【分組討論區】 --> 11 國家研究院政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 24.80.133.143