[請益] 英文自傳求批

看板Salary (工作職場)作者 (婊)時間13年前 (2013/04/18 23:24), 編輯推噓13(13030)
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各位小底小咩妳好 小阿姨今年三二欲求餐飲業的全職或兼職工作 對英文很沒有自信 太弱了都沒用 在此請求小底小美眉批改 感激在先! : My background is the functioning of government and Law : which helps raising the living standard of the civil : public and also advance the efficiency of public administration. My major is public administration and law which is related to the function of government and the relations of citizens. : Besides, I read western literature for example Greek mythology : and English masterpieces from taking the major classes of English : literature department and also hit high scores in the exams. 保留 : In conclusion, combined with law, language and the view of Therefore,... : international affairs, I believe that there is an opportunity : for adding values from being one of your members : in the corporation. : Moreover, having the working experience of serving the foreign : clients also helps me accelerate the understanding of west market : and realize that the ability of independence and being professional : are the two bases when it comes to an account manager. As a result, Moreover, according to the 4 years solid experiences of serving the international customers, I devote myself to cultivate the ability of coordinaiton between defferent benefits convey. : with the advantage of English skills and the enthusiasm of serving : the customers, I turn to restaurant and develop the know-how of : offering the food and beverage services. Hope to have your appreciation : and thanks for your browsing. 保留 有不通順的地方還請擔心! 已大修,餐飲有多益比較好找,請批,謝謝! -- 勇者,在牙醫檯上一個也沒有! -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.42.138.151

04/18 23:41, , 1F
餐飲業需要英文嗎 而且第一句就長得要死 這樣菩薩都沒法救
04/18 23:41, 1F

04/18 23:46, , 2F
看到第一句 我覺得就打槍了...
04/18 23:46, 2F

04/18 23:46, , 3F
不要為了想秀文法而寫...是要為了想表達而寫...
04/18 23:46, 3F

04/18 23:50, , 4F
這...@@...
04/18 23:50, 4F

04/18 23:51, , 5F
btw, 同意樓上 我英文自傳寫的像書信一樣哩~反而
04/18 23:51, 5F

04/18 23:51, , 6F
輕鬆簡單吸睛~
04/18 23:51, 6F

04/18 23:51, , 7F
Addidas這不需要嘛?請批改^^
04/18 23:51, 7F

04/18 23:52, , 8F
foreverthink所以中規中矩寫學歷科系即可?
04/18 23:52, 8F

04/18 23:53, , 9F
不知道ㄟ 我看到第一句 我就不想看下去了.....
04/18 23:53, 9F

04/18 23:54, , 10F
先把事情表達清楚後 再去修文法吧.....
04/18 23:54, 10F

04/18 23:54, , 11F
DreamOfPilot是喔怎麼寫像書信?
04/18 23:54, 11F

04/18 23:54, , 12F
且關代這種東西 不要亂用 要不然很難表達不清
04/18 23:54, 12F

04/18 23:55, , 13F
說錯 很容易表達不清楚
04/18 23:55, 13F

04/18 23:55, , 14F
foreverthink...所以就刪掉囉?
04/18 23:55, 14F

04/18 23:55, , 15F
歪郭人 對於關代這用法都很頭痛了 何況母語不是英文
04/18 23:55, 15F

04/18 23:55, , 16F
的人...
04/18 23:55, 16F

04/18 23:58, , 17F
你最前段 是想表你是讀公行畢業的嗎...
04/18 23:58, 17F

04/18 23:59, , 18F
還是行政管理系...
04/18 23:59, 18F

04/19 00:01, , 19F
foreverthink那是寫系名就好?我是公行法律雙主
04/19 00:01, 19F

04/19 00:02, , 20F
阿 哪間阿 文化 世新 中華 是pubilic administration
04/19 00:02, 20F

04/19 00:03, , 21F
台大 台北 淡江 義守 就不是這字眼了
04/19 00:03, 21F

04/19 00:04, , 22F
public administration是行政管理 不是公行...
04/19 00:04, 22F

04/19 00:04, , 23F
不太一樣..
04/19 00:04, 23F

04/19 00:05, , 24F
印象中..
04/19 00:05, 24F

04/19 00:20, , 25F
您好,最好還是附一下中文喔,大家才好幫您修正。^^
04/19 00:20, 25F

04/19 00:20, , 26F
應該說我的中文自傳跟英文自傳其實寫法有點不同
04/19 00:20, 26F

04/19 00:21, , 27F
英文有點像是把自傳和求職信結合的寫法 重點在簡單
04/19 00:21, 27F

04/19 00:21, , 28F
快速的讓對方知道我過去的簡歷和特點 而不寫的太
04/19 00:21, 28F

04/19 00:22, , 29F
文鄒鄒 外國人對太文鄒鄒的台灣文章其實會很囧
04/19 00:22, 29F

04/19 00:25, , 30F
D大 你說的是CV 不是自傳...
04/19 00:25, 30F

04/19 00:26, , 31F
基本上 外國人履歷 cv跟自傳都是要得....
04/19 00:26, 31F

04/19 00:27, , 32F
就像104上面 有你條列式的經歷 自傳是另外的....
04/19 00:27, 32F

04/19 00:28, , 33F
嗯嗯 我懂你說的 欸 可能我表達的不太對
04/19 00:28, 33F

04/19 00:29, , 34F
不過我以前是都有就是了:P
04/19 00:29, 34F

04/19 00:56, , 35F
Omg...
04/19 00:56, 35F

04/19 04:31, , 36F
不知道從何改起or建議 要不要直接套範本?
04/19 04:31, 36F

04/19 10:17, , 37F
有點不知從何改起 能改的很多 建議去找人幫寫
04/19 10:17, 37F

04/19 10:18, , 38F
btw 當你用in conclusion 那就該是最後一個paragraph
04/19 10:18, 38F

04/19 10:19, , 39F
不該在有下面的 moreover
04/19 10:19, 39F

04/19 16:07, , 40F
餐飲業寫啥英文= =?
04/19 16:07, 40F
※ 編輯: lifespan 來自: 114.44.102.101 (04/19 18:51)

04/19 22:23, , 41F
餐飲業不需要英文吧 就算有外國客也是看你英文口說
04/19 22:23, 41F

04/19 22:23, , 42F
寫這個沒有用
04/19 22:23, 42F

04/20 11:23, , 43F
almondchoco那餐飲業應該考什麼證照呢?
04/20 11:23, 43F
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