Re: [請益] 幫我修一下一分鐘口試稿

看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者 (Rajagopal)時間15年前 (2010/06/21 21:01), 編輯推噓2(205)
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: I have learned English for about ten years. For me, English is as familiar : as Chinese since I spend a lot of time on it. I go to the English cram school I've studied English for ten years. Because I spend a lot of time on English lessons, I am confident that my English skills are as good as native speakers. 個人不喜歡 cram school 這個字眼。 : five days a week. I never complain of the busy learning days because English : has become part of my life. Because of my effort, I am always the one in the I take an average of five English lessons a week and never had any complaint about such a busy schedule, possibly because English has become a part of my life. : name of my school to attend the English speech competition. I ever won the : first prize in the county competition when I was grade 2. Teachers usually tell me that I have a talent for English, which : makes me confident to learn it. I am learning English all the time, and I wish : I can keep it in my junior high school life. I desire school would give me the : chance to get further English knowledge. TKS In the primary school days, I was often elected to attend English competitions on behalf of my school. For example, I won the first prize in a national English competition when I was a primary two student. My past achievements in English should serve as evidence that I am a gifted secondary student with enough talent in managing laugnages. I strongly believe I can make positive contributions to the Gifted English Class of XXX Junior High School, and therefore I hope I will be given the chance to join the rest of the outstanding students of the Gifted Class next semester. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 111.248.16.175 ※ 編輯: astar 來自: 111.248.16.175 (06/21 21:11)

06/21 21:11, , 1F
原波改得好~~但我覺得不符合小六生的口吻(以及程度)
06/21 21:11, 1F

06/21 21:13, , 2F
這樣反而讓人覺得這篇是別人寫的..學生只是照著背誦..
06/21 21:13, 2F

06/21 22:33, , 3F
真的太強~謝謝兩位大大囉
06/21 22:33, 3F

06/22 16:33, , 4F
不過我看過北市龍門國中英語資優班學生寫的作文,完全看不出
06/22 16:33, 4F

06/22 16:33, , 5F
是國中生寫的。不過他們班上很多ABC之類的就是了。
06/22 16:33, 5F

06/22 16:35, , 6F
龍門校刊上看到的。感覺成熟到比絕大部分英文很好的台灣大人
06/22 16:35, 6F

06/22 16:35, , 7F
還好。
06/22 16:35, 7F
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