[Talk] please correct my essay thanks!

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One evening, Joe happily went to his best friend’s wedding. After arriving at the destination, he began to search the person who he had recognized. Joe suddenly found a woman who stand there is so familiar . ”Oh!it’s you!Amy! Since we graduated from high school, we have been a long time no seeing! I miss you!” They were so excited and surprised because of the encounter. From then on, they couldn’t stop talking about their job,family,and the life after graduating from shcool. They drank a lot of wine and couldn’t stop. Finally, Joe had drunk and had difficulty to stay in conscious . He decided to go home and slept. However,he tried very hard to leave there At the side of the road, he kept waving his hand to stop a taxi A car stopped, unfortunately, there stop a police car but not a taxi. He was so drunk that he even could not distinguish thepolice car from the taxi. The police officer took him to the police office at last. Few hours passed, it was eight o’clock, the sun had rose up for a long time. The police officer couldn’t tolerate and angrily scolded to Joe “Wake up!Wake up! This is not your home!” At the moment, Joe was woke up by the tremendous sound and showed his doubtful and shocked expression which seemed to say “Why am I here? “ The police officer said to Joe” Last night,I have a new job, not too bad, a taxi driver!” please correct the word and grammer that i made mistake thanks^^ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 122.117.151.214