Re: [Talk] please correct my essay thanks!
※ 引述《akheadshot (騎烏龜狂飆)》之銘言:
: One evening, Joe happily went to his best friend’s wedding. After arriving
: at the destination, he began to search the person who he had recognized. Joe
: suddenly found a woman who stand there is so familiar . ”Oh!it’s you!Amy!
: Since we graduated from high school, we have been a long time no seeing! I
: miss you!” They were so excited and surprised because of the encounter. From
: then on, they couldn’t stop talking about their job,family,and the life
: after graduating from shcool. They drank a lot of wine and couldn’t stop.
: Finally, Joe had drunk and had difficulty to stay in conscious . He decided
: to go home and slept.
One evening Joe happily went to his best friend's wedding. Once he got there,
he began to look around for people he knew. Suddenly Joe saw someone who
looked really familiar. "Oh, it's you, Amy! It's been a long time; I don't
think we've seen each other since we graduated from high school. I really
missed you." Joe said. They were really surprised but were also very excited
to see each other, and they couldn't stop talking about each other's jobs,
families, and everything that had happened since graduation. They talked and
drank, and before he knew it Joe was too drunk to remain conversational. It
was then Joe decided to go home and go to bed.
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