Re: [Talk] please correct my essay thanks!
One evening, Joe happily went to his best friend's wedding. After arriving
at the wedding location, he began to seek for any familiar faces. After a
few glances, he found a lady standing there. "Oh! It's you! Amy! Since
high school graduation, we haven't seen each other! I really miss you!"
Both Joe and Amy were getting excited and surprised for this unexpected
reunion. From the moment they met, they couldn't stop talking about job,
family and life after high school. Meanwhile, they also drank lots of wine
one sip after another. Finally, Joe couldn't stand it and decided to go home
for a rest. At the side of the road, he kept on waving his hand to stop a
taxi. After a while, there came a police car instead of a taxi. Joe was so
drunk that he couldn't even tell a difference between this police car from
a taxi. The police officer took him to the police station at last. After
a few hours, it was eight o'clock in the morning while the sun had already
risen up for a long time. The officer eventually lost his patience and
woke Joe up, "Wake up! Wake up! Ihis is not your home!" As Joe woke up,
he was still wondering, "Where am I now?!" The police office replied, "Where
do you think it is? But, not bad at all. I just found myself a side-
job: A taxi driver for drunks!"
※ 引述《akheadshot (騎烏龜狂飆)》之銘言：
: One evening, Joe happily went to his best friend’s wedding. After arriving
: at the destination, he began to search the person who he had recognized. Joe
: suddenly found a woman who stand there is so familiar . ”Oh!it’s you!Amy!
: Since we graduated from high school, we have been a long time no seeing! I
: miss you!” They were so excited and surprised because of the encounter. From
: then on, they couldn’t stop talking about their job,family,and the life
: after graduating from shcool. They drank a lot of wine and couldn’t stop.
: Finally, Joe had drunk and had difficulty to stay in conscious . He decided
: to go home and slept.
: However,he tried very hard to leave there
: At the side of the road, he kept waving his hand to stop a taxi
: A car stopped, unfortunately, there stop a police car but not a taxi. He
: was so drunk that he even could not distinguish thepolice car from the taxi.
: The
: police officer took him to the police office at last. Few hours
: passed, it was eight o’clock, the sun had rose up for a long time.
: The police officer couldn’t tolerate and angrily scolded to Joe
: “Wake up!Wake up! This is not your home!” At the moment,
: Joe was woke up by the tremendous sound and showed his
: doubtful and shocked expression which seemed to say “Why am I here? “ The
: police officer said to Joe” Last night,I have a new job, not too bad, a taxi
: driver!”
: please correct the word and grammer that i made mistake
: thanks^^
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