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[Ask ] I need some help on the sentence

看板EngTalk (全英文聊天)作者 (嘿嘿)時間17年前 (2008/12/03 22:21), 編輯推噓1(1推 0噓 5→)
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Dear. all I want to rewrite this paragraph : " The radio frequency (RF) and wireless market has suddenly expanded to unimaginable dimensions. Devices such as pagers, cellular and cordless phones, cable modems, and RF identification (RFID) tags are rapidly penetrating all aspects of our lives, evolving from luxury items to indispensable tools." This paragraph is copied from a reference, I want to write it into my essay for statement of purpose, but, I afraid of causing plagiarism. I try to rewrite it, but, however, the words selected of this paragraph are too excellent to substitute which I have no ability to adapt. Could someone help me rewrite it? I really need the help, thank you very much. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 211.79.153.82
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12/04 14:13, , 1F
Asking someone to "reconstruct" this paragraph for your
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12/04 14:13, , 2F
own need, isn't it another kind of piracy?
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12/04 14:14, , 3F
If what you are concerned is your English ability isn't
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12/04 14:14, , 4F
good enough, how about write down your idea about this
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12/04 14:15, , 5F
article in Chinese first, and try to rewrite it in Eng?
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12/04 14:15, , 6F
and then ask someone to improve?
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