[SC]文法求救 By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline
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By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen official national and international speed records, earned at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were of dangerously experimental design.
Earned 是修飾record 不是應該要連在一起沒逗點嗎？
1. earned 前面沒有逗點的話正確嗎？
2. 改成以下分詞子句正確嗎？
By 1940 aviation was still so new, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran, earning seventeen official national and international speed records at a time, flew many of the planes were of dangerously experimental design.
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