[問題] 請問argument首段的引言

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想請教大家考AWA的argument時，introduction要引用原文到什麼程度呢? 雖然說仔細一點是把作者提出的證據、理由等都寫進去然而因為我打字速度不夠快，有時候覺得打完就花很多時間(例如說~5mins) 可否請板大們賜教? 舉個例子 "Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risen by thirty percent. Potential employers apparently believe the grades at Omega are inflated; this would explain why Omega graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should now terminate student evaluation of professors." 我的第一段如下： The author concludes that Omega University should terminate student evaluation of professor to help their student to secure better jobs. To support it, the author claims that the overall student grade averages at Omega have risen thirty percent since the evaluation was implemented, and that the graduate of Omega failed to find good employment than that of Alpha University did because of inflated grades. However, the author commits several fallacies in the argument... 我只簡述了成績提升和找工作表現比A校差，並沒提雇主懷疑成績灌水不知道板大們對於首段寫作有沒有什麼好建議? (首次發文，請多指教^^" 祝大家考試順利!!!) -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 115.43.18.91