[寫作班] 托福第7週 kapolo,2

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者 (膚淺國度)時間16年前 (2008/04/08 23:40), 編輯推噓1(102)
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: 2. Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to : save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and : examples to support your opinion. Because of currency is one of the most important materials for living, how to perfectly manage the money we earn being more meaningful. We not only need to save our dollar for the unknown future, but also have to spend our cash for some entertainment. Both of the ways to handle our money are needed. We should keep our money for any possible accident as animals preparing foods for the harsh day. When the winter comes, no body can live without the saving. People have to prepare for the next great depression. However, we should saving money not only for the hard time, but also for the future goals. If we plan to traveling all over the world or buying everything we like. We need to save our money for these plans. We can not reaching our goals by running out of the money just after we earn it. In conclusion, we should save our money for the future. We will like our life by doing the right decision; we can enjoy the future rather than worry it. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.229.136.170 ※ 編輯: kapolo 來自: 61.229.136.170 (04/08 23:42)

04/10 08:51, , 1F
Hi, 你寫完後有沒有自己從頭檢查一遍? 比如should後面是
04/10 08:51, 1F

04/10 08:51, , 2F
接怎樣的動詞?(你後面有寫對,所以你知道該接甚麼)
04/10 08:51, 2F

04/12 13:56, , 3F
糟糕...文法常常都是靠感覺的狀態(汗@~@"")
04/12 13:56, 3F
文章代碼(AID): #17-v7GEU (ST-English)
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文章代碼(AID): #17-v7GEU (ST-English)