Re: [寫作班] 托福第7週 kapolo,2

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者dvlin (Dee)時間16年前 (2008/04/11 11:02)推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)

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※ 引述《kapolo (膚淺國度)》之銘言： : : 2. Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to : : save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and : : examples to support your opinion. : Because of currency is one of the most important materials for living, how xx : to perfectly manage the money we earn being more meaningful. We not only need ^^^^^is : to save our dollar for the unknown future, but also have to spend our cash : for some entertainment. Both of the ways to handle our money are needed. : We should keep our money for any possible accident as animals preparing foods prepare : for the harsh day. When the winter comes, no body can live without the ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ nobody ^^^ *Consider revising e.g., "for harsh days" : saving. People have to prepare for the next great depression. ^^^^^^ savings? ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^* *Predicting another "great depression" in the future is very bold. Perhaps it's better to just say a "recession" or an "economic downturn"? : However, we should saving money not only for the hard time, but also for the save xxx : future goals. If we plan to traveling all over the world or buying everything travel to buy : we like. We need to save our money for these plans. We can not reaching our , we reach : goals by running out of the money just after we earn it. if we spend all the money... : In conclusion, we should save our money for the future. We will like our life : by doing the right decision; we can enjoy the future rather than worry it. worry about it. -- 一個學術英文寫作領域的討論板在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉【分組討論區】 --> 11 國家研究院政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 99.231.10.180