Re: [寫作班] BBS , smartboyjerr
補充一些。
※ 引述《dvlin ()》之銘言：
: ※ 引述《smartboyjerr ()》之銘言：
: : Bulletin Board System (BBS) is a computer system base on the Internet.
^^^^^^^^^ based on
: : One of the largest BBS and most famous one is PTT. Acorrding to PTT’s system
: ^the
這裡我比較喜歡用the system record of PTT，因為's所有格的用法
比較常用在「人」身上，「事物」比較少見。
: : record, the average number of users who are online at the same time is more
: : than fourty thousands.
: sp:"forty"; thousand不用加s
「同時」還有simultaneously這個副詞可以用。
: : Today, lots of students like to spend their time surfing on BBS.
: : They use BBS to as a way to communicate with others, making new friends or
: of communicating
: 跟之前一樣，要用一樣的詞性
: So, "... communicating... making... getting..."
"They use BBS as..."，這裡的to不需要。
: : getting the newly information. BBS undoubtedly became an important role in our
: : daily life.
: 為了延續這個段落的時態，用"has become"比較好
補充：用has become的話，可以寫成
"BBS has undoubtedly become..."或"Undoubtedly, BBS has become..."
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