Re: [寫作班] BBS , smartboyjerr

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者dvlin時間17年前 (2007/10/21 06:12)推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)

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※ 引述《smartboyjerr ()》之銘言： : Bulletin Board System (BBS) is a computer system base on the Internet. : It provides users a lot of useful functions, such as publishing articles, : exchange messages and online games. 連接三個的詞性要一致 e.g., "... publishing articles, exchanging messages and playing online games." : At the early stage of Internet development when people still use modem used modems : connects to the Internet, BBS is very popular. The first BBS was started in to connect was : 1972 in Berkeley, California. Unfortunately, after the World Wide Web was : invented, BBS has lost its crown. had 注意時態喔雖然從現在的觀點來看，"BBS has lost its crown"並沒有錯，但是原句中的referece point是"World Wide Web was invented"的當時，所以要用過去完成式 : However, there are many users still like to use BBS today and most of ^^^^^^^^^不需要there are 可以說"many users still like to use BBS..." 或"there are many users who still like...." : them are students. Because information on BBS exchanges very fast and almost is exchanged (People exchange information; information doesn't exchange itself.) : every university in Taiwan have there own BBS, it is still popular in campus. their on : One of the largest BBS and most famous one is PTT. Acorrding to PTT’s system ^the : record, the average number of users who are online at the same time is more : than fourty thousands. sp:"forty"; thousand不用加s : Today, lots of students like to spend their time surfing on BBS. : They use BBS to as a way to communicate with others, making new friends or of communicating 跟之前一樣，要用一樣的詞性 So, "... communicating... making... getting..." : getting the newly information. BBS undoubtedly became an important role in our : daily life. 為了延續這個段落的時態，用"has become"比較好 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 99.231.10.180 ※ 編輯: dvlin 來自: 99.231.10.180 (10/21 06:12) ※ 編輯: dvlin 來自: 99.231.10.180 (10/21 06:20)