Re: [寫作班] Computer- Carol
※ 引述《carol0228 (想放假ﳿ艢 )》之銘言：
: I've been a secretary fot more forty years. my company is quite a big
: and busy one.
"for" "My"
: In the beginning, I was quite busy, and seldom took a brake,
"break"
: because I have too many thing to do in a day. However, with the rapid
^^^ 這裡我會建議用"in one day"
強調「一天」的意思。
: development of technology, everything becomes easier and easier. Thanks to
: the computers, i don't have to call lots of clients and remember my boss's
"I" ^^^^^^^^^^
remeber by heart也可用memorize
boss's建議用boss'即可
: schedule by heart. Moreover, I don't have to work overtime, and make less
: mistakes.
這句用and連接，會讓人意會成「我不用加班，也『不用犯比較少的錯』」。
建議改為I don't...., and now I make...
:I firmly believe that the computer is the greatest invention
: within a day.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 一天內最偉大的發明？你想說的是？
請參考囉。
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