Re: [寫作班] PTT 新板成立計畫, HIbaby

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者chileno (月月)時間17年前 (2007/11/02 22:25)推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)

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: A plan for new boards in PTT 標題的寫法：所有的字第一個字母大寫，冠詞跟介系詞除外。所以標題會變成： A Plan for New Boards in PTT : Aim : Fields in disease and drug mechanism are important for people 1. 主詞的寫法有點怪，我會寫成： The fields of mechanisms of diseases and drugs 可是看了後文，你的field要表達的似乎不是領域，而是空間？那最好再換種說法。 2. 主修生命科學的人可以直接稱為life science majors : major in life science. However, such kinds of discussion place ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 是要說：「這類的討論空間」嗎？ such places for duscussion如何？其實space說不定更好。 : are not popular on internet with Chinese language interface. Thus, 1.internet最好用 the Internet 2. with Chinese...放到後面，變成修飾Internet，而不是你想說的討論空間了。這句可能得整句改動。例如 Such spaces for discussion-- with Chinese language interfaces-- are not popular on the Internet. : establishing Pathology and Drug boards in PTT is a way to improve : interaction of PTT users in biological and medical fields. 1.因前面兩句都是現在式，所以我會建議這句的is a way...改成 can be a way... 畢竟這件事還沒做，無法確定到底會不會成功。 2.interaction"s" "among" 會更精確。後面這句這樣寫會更漂亮； ...can be a way of improving interactions among PTT users from the fields of biology or medicine. : Methods : Boards establishing : 40 people with 200 times logging and publishing in PTT are : required for cosigning a new board. USER-SEARCHING function of 1. people建議改為users。 2. publishing? 你要說的是posts嗎？發文？ 3. 句型建議改一下： A new board requires 40 cosigners, who have logged in 200 times... : PTT is used for finding the people with qualification. In addition, ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ qulified users就可以了 : mailing to my friends is another choice for cosigning new boards. ^^^前面都沒有出現I，這裡最好還是保持第三人稱。另外，後面其實可以這樣說： ... is another choice for encouraging the consigning of a new board. : Inviting administrator for new boards : Enthusiasm of administrators is a key of success in boards managing, : even exceed in professional character. Activate users in Biotech-board 你是要說：甚至超過專業背景嗎？我會建議說：which is even more important than their professionalism : or other boards as a human source for administrators. 1.Activave users? 是不是可以直接說Active users？ 2.第二個board可以省略。 3.這句沒動詞了。如果你想用activate當祈使句的動詞，建議改用encourage。不過這樣，後面那個as就很怪... : Prefect : Pathology and Drug boards may give a new place to attract more people : interested in these fields, and provide more related information. 1.prefect是指？我一直想到Harry Potter裡面的prefect XD 2.這裡的give是指？或者是直接說：can be a new place? 請參考:) -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 125.224.58.70