[寫作班] 托福第一週 5 effervescenc

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者 (Waltz of Flowers)時間16年前 (2008/02/03 10:15), 編輯推噓4(405)
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It is no doubt that if a factory built in my community, the residents there can have more opportunity to find a job. Nevertheless, I am definitely opposed to this prosopal with the following reasons. They are inflation, traffic problems and environment destruction. First, if a new factory is built near my community, not only the residents live here will work in the new company but also people who originally live in other citys or countries will join in. If this happend,the consumption of food, dormitory and many kinds of commodities would highly rise. So the inflation problems will happen, people need to spend more much money to buy the same goods compare to other communities. Second, the number of residents will grow deeply. The number of automobiles will also proportional to the new number of residents. What results is it becomes harder to move on the roads and streets and children face more danger from the road home to school. Last but not least, the polution made from the new factory will danger our health.The reivers will be polluted by the waste water, and some kind of heavy metals will make big influence to our bodies. Trees and animals will in danger of extinction, and we will no longer have a nice place outdoors to play and joy. For these reasons, I am personally oppsoed this project of building a new factory near my community. To have a good living environment and good health is more important. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 218.211.81.192

02/04 04:35, , 1F
if a factory build in .... -> if a factory is built
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02/04 04:35, , 2F
...... built
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02/04 09:00, , 3F
thanks
02/04 09:00, 3F

02/05 00:14, , 4F
have more opportunities 應該用複數吧?
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02/05 00:16, , 5F
proposal拼錯囉~
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02/05 00:19, , 6F
對了 還有compare with 用法跟compare to不同,就這些^.^
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02/05 00:20, , 7F
希望有幫助到
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02/07 23:15, , 8F
3Q
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02/13 23:49, , 9F
reivers-->rivers
02/13 23:49, 9F
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