Re: [寫作班] JennyQ - 托福第一週 1

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者physheepy時間16年前 (2008/02/07 04:47)推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)

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Some suggestion. ※ 引述《jennyQ (默默靜靜)》之銘言： : The main reasons for people to attend college is to gain professional : knowledge and skills. Besides, going to college may also improve one's their it's corresponding to people : social ability and cultivate one's independence, since most of the college their : students live far from their hometown. My personal experience and actual : observations have led me to say so. observation I think the two words should be both sigular or plural, and I think the sugular ones are better here. : I have just graduated from university. Things what I have learned X : there were not just all about my major, though it's also important to study X : those subjects. My major is Pharmacy, which is difficult and consumes time : very much. I had to study hard, take much time discussing homework with my and spend : classmates, and search the internet or look up papers in the library to solve X searching the Internet and reading papers.... : problems. By teamwork, it saved me lots of time; furthermore, I learned more put this phrase after "time" : about cooperation with others. : The university which I studied is far from my hometown. It was the very in was : first time for me to leave my parents. Everything I need all have to be X : prepared by myself, such as commodities, finding house to rent, and financial : management. Those things were not easy to me at first, so I had to be strong for : and learn to be independent. This really helps me grow up. helped : Reasons for people to attend college are well documented, and the reasons interpreted X : for me are that I can obtain not just powerful professional knowledge but social is only : skills and personal independence. My college life did cultivate me into a : mature and professional one. person -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.230.9.91 ※ 編輯: physheepy 來自: 61.230.9.91 (02/07 04:49)