Re: [寫作班] JennyQ - 托福第一週 1

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者mingtai1 ((￣︿￣メ)╭∩╮)時間17年前 (2008/02/07 14:57)推噓1(1推 0噓 1→)

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Some minor editing. ※ 引述《physheepy ()》之銘言： : Some suggestion. : ※ 引述《jennyQ (默默靜靜)》之銘言： : : The main reasons for people to attend college is to gain professional reason : : knowledge and skills. Besides, going to college may also improve one's : their : it's corresponding to people : : social ability and cultivate one's independence, since most of the college : their X X : : students live far from their hometown. My personal experience and actual : : observations have led me to say so. : observation : I think the two words should be both sigular or plural, and I think : the sugular ones are better here. : : I have just graduated from university. Things what I have learned : X : : there were not just all about my major, though it's also important to study : X : : those subjects. My major is Pharmacy, which is difficult and consumes time : : very much. I had to study hard, take much time discussing homework with my : and spend : : classmates, and search the internet or look up papers in the library to solve : X searching the Internet and reading papers.... : : problems. By teamwork, it saved me lots of time; furthermore, I learned more : put this phrase after "time" : : about cooperation with others. : : The university which I studied is far from my hometown. It was the very : in was I think "is" here is ok? : : first time for me to leave my parents. Everything I need all have to be : X has : : prepared by myself, such as commodities, finding house to rent, and financial houses : : management. Those things were not easy to me at first, so I had to be strong : for : : and learn to be independent. This really helps me grow up. : learned helped : : Reasons for people to attend college are well documented, and the reasons : interpreted X : : for me are that I can obtain not just powerful professional knowledge but social : is only : : skills and personal independence. My college life did cultivate me into a : : mature and professional one. : person ※ 編輯: mingtai1 來自: 116.59.153.140 (02/07 14:58) ※ 編輯: mingtai1 來自: 116.59.153.140 (02/07 15:00)