Re: [寫作班] 托福第16週 liuyijen,4

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※ 引述《liuyijen ( 阿仔)》之銘言： : Although to work independently is also an important ability, it is more ^^^^ : possible to work with other people than to work alone. It is definitely ^^^^^^^^* *Although "possible" and "probable" both translate to "可能", in a strictly technical sense, "possible" is very black-and-white: something is either possible or impossible; "more possible" doesn't not make sense logically. *I think you can describe with more specificity, and say it's more "effecient", "productive", or some other adjective, to work with others. : more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team, because : our society is build on the foundation of united. built : Since I was a college student, most of the teachers liked us to do group works. : At first, I thought the teachers just wanted us to break the ice with other : students. However, to my surprise, I found out that by discussing as a group, : I could think of more ideas and inspired by my classmates. I could come up with : some creative answers, which was the last thing I would imagine before. : Team works are also common in most of the companies. By cooperating with xxxxxx : coworkers, we can find out a better solution or a better idea efficiently. xxx : For example, says there were 30 pages of documents which were waited to be let's say ^^^^* waiting : typed in computer. Each person can type 1 document in 1 hour. If one worker into the could* : typed it alone, he would need 30 hours to finish the typing job. It did not : seem to be a easy job, because he might get bored easily. But if 15 people : typed the document at the same time, it took only 2 hours to finish all of : them. It will be easier and faster for everyone, and they would finish the would* (*Maintain the same tense.) : job before getting board. bored : Besides, we can easily find out mistakes we made in the works by cooperating xxx : with people. I have a good experience about this opinion. Couple months ago, ^A : I wrote an essay about the business model of Walmart with my classmates. Each : of us was responsible for a part of essay. The biggest challenge was that we : had to write it in English, so it was a little difficult to us. The first : meeting time, we exchanged our parts of the essay to check out if there were : something needed to be modified, and everyone found some grammar or vocabulary : mistakes from the other one’s parts. In fact, all of us had checked our parts : of essay again and again, but we just can not notice some stupid mistakes like : “You was” or “three merchant” in our own parts. It was really important to : have somebody to do double check work. : All in all, 3 normal people’s intelligent overcome one genius’. From the ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ *There is an actual old English adage for describing this type of situation: "Three heads are better than one." : reasons above, I think team work is a better way to do most of works. -- 一個學術英文寫作領域的討論板在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉【分組討論區】 --> 11 國家研究院政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 70.79.36.70