[請益] 請各位幫我看英文自介

看板Salary (工作職場)作者 (抹茶很好吃)時間13年前 (2012/03/11 02:13), 編輯推噓2(207)
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煩請各位幫我看一下英文自介 大概是兩分鐘的基本介紹 可能寫的非常不好,許多文法和單字都不清楚使用的是否得當 麻煩各位幫我看一下 非常感謝各位指教,謝謝 My name is XXX.I graduated from XXX university and my major was Russian . In college period,I was a once the cheif of document and file in student association of our department.In charge to categorize documents and publish department's periodical.In addition,I have joined in the department's contestsand performance.In my learning,I received semester scholarship from university. Because my parents have to run a restaurant,when I was in the university, I was part time job in my family's business.I had to do waitress,accounting assistant,that I learned the basic accounting affirs , how to communicate with people and know organization ethics. My perfessional job experience is necessarily limited,but I am sure that I will be earnset in my work and be actively solve problems. The above is my self-introduction. I wish to be granted an opportunity to join yours. Thank you. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 123.192.180.161 ※ 編輯: matchacat 來自: 123.192.180.161 (03/11 02:33)

03/11 03:36, , 1F
看不懂,錯字連篇,文法也很怪 通篇幾乎都是III
03/11 03:36, 1F

03/11 09:58, , 2F
同意樓上..請重新檢視文法
03/11 09:58, 2F

03/11 10:31, , 3F
謝謝你們的建議,我會在重新修改:)
03/11 10:31, 3F

03/11 11:46, , 4F
I 服 U
03/11 11:46, 4F

03/11 13:34, , 5F
要速成就買英文自傳範例的書,拿來套用
03/11 13:34, 5F

03/11 14:41, , 6F
突然想到之前我花了好幾千塊請專業的幫忙改 結果改完我還
03/11 14:41, 6F

03/11 14:41, , 7F
沒把升級版的自介貼到104上 就都錄取了 整個白忙一場@@
03/11 14:41, 7F

03/11 17:57, , 8F
政大俄語系? 哇咧沒問題
03/11 17:57, 8F

03/11 17:58, , 9F
完全OK。準備去上班吧
03/11 17:58, 9F
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