[請益] 英文自傳

看板Salary (工作職場)作者 (Tara)時間13年前 (2012/05/15 01:18), 編輯推噓6(605)
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我是應屆畢業生 第一次寫求職英文自傳, 我的英文寫作能力大學4年退步很多阿!(跪) 我要投的公司是台灣公司,需要 短篇的英文自傳 我有參考前輩們的文章,但還是有要改進的部分 希望板上的高手能幫我看看有哪裡需要改進的.. 非常感謝!!!! m(_ _ )m 應徵工作是財務方面的 I am XXXX studies banking and finance, graduated from Tamkang University this year. {About my personality traits} I’m easygoing, open-minded and optimistic but easily move to tears. I have high ability to adapt to the environment that can familiarize myself into work rapidly {About my Work Experience} My family didn’t cover all my expenses so I found a part-time job after school. Over three years of work experience in Tamkang University and I also have an experience working as a customer service representative in the Fubon Bank. Both jobs required me to speak to customers via telephone. Opposing to the ordinaty stereotype that the customer serivice is a boring job, I've actually quite enjoyed in the position because it gave me an opportunity to improve my telephone etiquette, my problem solving capability, and my self-esteem.My direct supervisors say that I’m very cautious, dependable and efficient because I frequently find the error on the document. 在學校工讀3年也有在銀行工作 "Over 3 .......in the Fubon bank" 這裡我一直覺得哪裡怪,但不知道要怎麼寫才會比較好.. {About my extracurricular activities} My volunteer involvement with Mackay Memorial Hospital's Children volunteers club provided great opportunities for me to get work experiences, to meet people, to learn new s kills, and best of all, to help childern who are less fortunate than I am. 請問有人知道兒童志工的英文怎麼寫嗎??? Given an opportunity to work in XXX公司, I would do my best to prove my capability. 請大家指教 非常感謝!!!! -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 218.211.29.104

05/15 03:47, , 1F
建議你把句子改短些 因為你的子句都怪怪的
05/15 03:47, 1F

05/15 07:38, , 2F
move to tears.....
05/15 07:38, 2F

05/15 09:28, , 3F
寫英文應該條列式,應徵職稱一開始就要寫
05/15 09:28, 3F

05/15 09:34, , 4F
1應徵職稱 2能力條列 3學歷條列 4獎項條列 5經驗條列
05/15 09:34, 4F

05/15 11:44, , 5F
直接打給人資說沒英文履歷 不_不要面(誤
05/15 11:44, 5F

05/15 11:47, , 6F
形容詞太多.............
05/15 11:47, 6F

05/15 12:10, , 7F
還是流水帳 自己之前的經驗學到什麼東西 要如何把這些東
05/15 12:10, 7F

05/15 12:11, , 8F
西contribute到往後的工作?
05/15 12:11, 8F

05/15 13:34, , 9F
第一句文法就錯了...>.<
05/15 13:34, 9F

05/15 17:11, , 10F
感覺英文專業度不足 可以試著翻翻英文書籍 加油
05/15 17:11, 10F

06/06 00:03, , 11F
寫的算滿糟的, 不仿給人看看, 或多參考相關資料!
06/06 00:03, 11F
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