[書信] 請問開發信寫法？

看板intltrade (國際貿易)作者jeanaej (毋需多言)時間17年前 (2009/02/06 17:54)推噓6(6推 0噓 12→)

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各位版友好，事情是這樣的：家父公司有客戶定了10台機器，結果說經濟不景氣又取消訂單，但是機器已經做好了。小資本經營的工廠，機器再賣不出去、拿不到貨款，就要週轉不靈了。慶幸的是機器還沒交貨，所以要想辦法趕快把機器賣掉。幫家父寫了一封開發信，因為還在求學，沒有相關經驗，可以麻煩版友幫忙看看，有無需要修改的地方嗎？謝謝！祝各位版友事業順利！平安度過這波不景氣！ p.s.寫開發信的對象，預計是印度市場，希望可以順利賣出 >"< ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear Sirs MICRO ETCH CHEMICAL RECOVER MACHINE FOR PCB FACTORY Are you worrying about waste chemical discharge? Now our SR-II MICRO ETCH CHEMICAL RECOVER MACHINE can solve your problem. Good points of this machine as follow: 1. Reduce waste chemical discharge for environmental protection. 2. Save money by reducing chemical consumption. 3. Increase procuction capacity by decreasing the time of idling to add new chemical. 4. Stable copper ion density means stable process. Environmental protection is an important policy in your country. That is, you may have tax exemptions by purchasing our SR-II Micro Etch Chemical Recover Machine. Moreover, you can get money back in short time by selling by-product copper sulfate. SR-II MICRO ETCH CHEMICAL RECOVER MACHINE reduce the copper ion by taking out copper sulfate crystal from micro etch chemical, and then you can reuse the recovered chemical. Normally, it does not need to drain chemical off. Besides, you can save chemical 25% even more. To cost down, you need SR-II MICRO ETCH CHEMICAL RECOVER MACHINE. Please contact us if your PCB factories use sulfuric acid & H2O2 for micro etch process. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully, XXX -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 59.113.60.231

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