Re: [文法] 分詞構句

看板Eng-Class (英文板)作者k66k66 (k66)時間14年前 (2011/10/07 23:33)推噓1(1推 0噓 2→)

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: : The lady walked in the park, and she saw a man. (用分詞構句改寫) : : 答案是 Walking in the park, the lady saw a man. : : 但有學生寫 The lady walked in the park, seeing a man. : -- : ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) : ◆ From: 140.120.84.52 : → priv:我覺得是你的觀念不夠完整 10/07 22:25 : → priv:瞬間動作不適合用進行式沒錯，但是這邊不是進行式 10/07 22:25 : → priv:I sat on a chair. I looked up the sky. 10/07 22:28 : → priv:轉換成I sat on the chair, looking up the sky. 10/07 22:28 : → priv:這邊的分詞構句只是表達前後順序 10/07 22:29 : → priv:looking並沒有進行式的意味在裡面 10/07 22:29 : → priv:其它表原因理由的分詞構句亦同 10/07 22:30 : → priv:所以你學生寫的..其實是可以 10/07 22:32 : → k66k66:我還是覺得很怪耶 >< 如果改成 The lady walked in the 10/07 22:39 : → k66k66:park, staring at a man 我覺得就可以 10/07 22:39 : → k66k66:所以我個人覺得是see這個動詞的緣故 10/07 22:40 : → dunchee:你學生寫的不能算是錯參考: http://ppt.cc/IPXT 10/07 23:00 : → dunchee:(busy now. I'll post it here: 10/07 23:02 : → dunchee:http://dunchee.blogspot.com/2011/04/temp.html 10/07 23:02 謝謝priv和dunchee的建議 seeing的確可以用在分詞構句裡 :) 我有沿伸問題：例： Seeing his roommate, he walked into the room. -> 先看到，之後進房 (He saw his roommate and walked into the room.) Walking into his room, he saw his roommate. -> 先進房，之後才看到 (He walked into his room and saw his roommate.) 兩個動作的前後順序改變了，對嗎？所以，She walked in the park and saw a man. 的改寫應是 Walking in the park, she saw a man. 這樣順序才對 (先公園散步，之後才看到) 若是 She walked in the park, seeing a man. 那原句應該是 She saw a man and walked in the park. (先看到，之後才去散步) 結論：學生的寫法，文法上是對的，但是動作的順序倒過來了，是這樣嗎？謝謝大家不吝指教!! ※ 編輯: k66k66 來自: 114.38.2.22 (10/07 23:35)