Re: [寫作班] Christmas / Physheepy
※ 引述《physheepy ()》之銘言：
: When it comes to Christmas, we think about gifts, glittery decorations,
: and riotous parties. People enjoy themselves on their Christmas vacation. They
: go to concert or party in fancy dress. They enjoy an extravagant big meal.
ocncerts parties dresses
: They buy expensive presents and cards to friends and family members. They say
: "Merry Christmas and Happy New year." as greetings. Everything seems joyful
我不知道這邊的標點符號這樣用行不行ㄝ~~
感覺上直接刪掉"和. 比較安全..麻煩知道的人提供一下意見
: because a whole new year is coming.
: However, not all people can have a merry Christmas.When we are planning
: the activities for Christmas celebration, many people, especially in the
: undeveloped countries, are suffering and struggling for just living. When
: we are over-full and throw away the surplus food into trash cans, there
X
: are many people dying of starvation and illness. What a big contrast it is!
: I don't mean to dampen anybody's joy at this important festival. We are
: busy in hard-working for the whole year and it's a good time to take a break
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: with family. However, I think we should keep in mind that we are the lucky
^our luckiest
: ones. Not all people have the rights to enjoy at Christmas. We should be
: grateful for our fortune and treasure what we own. If you have the ability and
that X
: opportunity, try to help the unfortunate people. Share the happiness and bring
: merry Christmas to them --just like what Santa Clause do. I think it will
Claus does
: take more joys to you than just a big meal or a party.
bring joy我想應該是不可數的
Your wirting skill is quite high! I am expecting your next article.^^
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