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看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者 (浪人劍客)時間17年前 (2008/01/09 15:50), 編輯推噓3(3推 0噓 15→)
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Let me write something about biography of Newton, the most grand scientist in the 19 century. I have no reference about Netwon right now, so I just introduce him by my memory. The most famous thing is that he found the gravity from an apple dropped into the ground. The another famous thing for me is that he created the calculus, same as Leibniz. Actually, the time that they both created the calculus is almost the same. But according to the history, Newton is angry for this, and claimed that calculus originate from him. Since I heard this thing, the evaluation of Newton in my mind have became negative. Netwon also studied the nature of light, and found the light is like as particles. He also found the color of light by prism. Overall, Netwon is the great scientist and established the base of classic physics. His achievement must be absoluately over than I can describe. It is my first English writing, hope someone can help me improve this. Thank you. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.116.204.249
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01/11 02:23, , 1F
I suggest you revise your article again. There are
01/11 02:23, 1F
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01/11 02:24, , 2F
many mistakes. I'll help to give more advice when I
01/11 02:24, 2F
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01/11 02:26, , 3F
have free time. Most important of all, I don't think
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01/11 02:28, , 4F
Newton interpreted light as particles. This concept
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01/11 02:40, , 5F
was under debate and has no conclusion for several
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01/11 02:41, , 6F
century. (sorry, I miss some words. ~~ light as part
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01/11 02:44, , 7F
-ticles in a right way.)
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01/11 02:46, , 8F
so I don't think "found" is appropriate here
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01/11 09:50, , 9F
Thank you, but I don't know the mistakes mean grammar
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01/11 09:53, , 10F
problem or the description about Newton. I know "found"
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01/11 09:54, , 11F
is not a appropriate word beccause I don't know much
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01/11 09:56, , 12F
word to this. I wrote this by my impression only.
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01/11 10:03, , 13F
If your mistakes mean this, I will be to this direction
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01/11 10:07, , 14F
to revise. If it is grammar problems, please forgive me
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01/11 10:08, , 15F
it is difficult to find my mistakes myself. I need some
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01/11 10:10, , 16F
help. Thanks for your reply and be willing give me
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01/11 10:12, , 17F
advice, that will push me post more article here.
01/11 10:12, 17F
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01/11 13:22, , 18F
這篇英文太 中式 了.
01/11 13:22, 18F
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