Re: [寫作班] corson - Biography

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※ 引述《corson (浪人劍客)》之銘言： : Let me introduce the biography about Newton (1643-1727), the grandest : scientist in the 17 century. : Newton was born in a remote village, and his family was not very rich. : This point also affected his college life. He had to be a assistant of ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^這也有點中式英文 ^^an 可以寫Therefore, Hence連接前因後果就行了. : professor, and learn many things. Newton was not very special in his ^^^^^^^^^ ^^ed 這裡你要指明限定某些教授his/the professor(s)或是不限定(professors) : boyhood days, but he was interested in unknown. boyhood就可以指童年 unknowns : Newton entered Cambridge Unverisity, and met a good teacher who affectd : Newton in science and philosophy. Newton had studied the light structure : by prism after graduating. He was back to his country because of the : plague. He thought the calculus, gravity and optic in this period. : Newton wrote some books, and the famous one, Principle, described the : law of motion. This achievement affects the later several hundred-year ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ This books had affected the development of science for the following several hundred years : science. Netwon was also a inventor, and he inventor reflective telescope ^^an invented : by his understanding of optic. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 這句感覺有點多餘. : In my option, Newton's law of motion represents a predictable world concept. : That indeed conflicts with the later quantum mechanics. Overall, Netwon : owned multiple identity, scientist, mathematician, and philosopher. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 中式英文. Identity是身份;而且和此要表達的意義不合.你可以考慮用Multidimensional : No doubt he was all excellent in these fields. His achievement is much excellent in all these fields. : more than I can describe. : I found some information about Newton in internet, and revise it. on d : Please give me some comments for this. Thank you. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.109.18.149 ※ 編輯: mingtai1 來自: 140.109.18.149 (01/15 11:47)