Re: [寫作班] corson - Biography
I tried to find some obvious grammartical errors for you.
PS. Correcting these grammartical errors cannot make your article fluent.
Maybe it still needs to be revised later.
※ 引述《corson (浪人劍客)》之銘言：
: Let me write something about biography of Newton, the most grand
: scientist in the 19 century.
: I have no reference about Netwon right now, so I just introduce
: him by my memory.
: The most famous thing is that he found the gravity from an apple
: dropped into the ground. The another famous thing for me is that
^^^^^^^
which dropped to the ground. Another famous...
: he created the calculus, same as Leibniz. Actually, the time that
and so did Leibniz.
: they both created the calculus is almost the same. But according
^^ was ^^^ But is rarely
used as the beginning in formal writing (some novels will use)
: to the history, Newton is angry for this, and claimed that calculus
was
: originate from him. Since I heard this thing, the evaluation of Newton
originated ^^^^^can be skipped
: in my mind have became negative.
had, or just write became.
: Netwon also studied the nature of light, and found the light is like as
^^^^^^^^^^
acts like
: particles. He also found the color of light by prism.
: Overall, Netwon is the great scientist and established the base of classic
greatest basis
: physics. His achievement must be absoluately over than I can describe.
His achievement is much more than I can describe.
: It is my first English writing, hope someone can help me improve this.
^
.Hope ....
: Thank you.
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