Re: [寫作班] 托福第27週 soundspeed,1

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※ 引述《soundspeed (myway)》之銘言： : I totally agree opinion that schools should include some exercising classes as ^to the ^physical (lessons) : part of school life. There should be some activities to enhance the physical (curriculum) (that) : and mental health of students because of being only concentrated on the academic because we want them to develop holistically and : studies would not absolutely benefit students. Only indoor learning would make not overlooking their health. (why only?) (will) : them feel bored and deteriorate the study efficiency. Following would list the (lower their efficiency in studying) : reaosns why I support this idea. (spelling) : In this modern society, we have consumed too many fast foods which contain too (much) (excessive : much fat. Such food would increase the cholesterol in our blood. So, many fat content) (will) : people, including both adults and teenagers, are running risk of high blood (regardless of their age) (high on the risk of) : pressure, stroke, and hear attack. As it is widely known that sufficient (sp) : exercises could help to burn out fat in our blood. For the schools, where (body) ^then?? : students spend most their time, it is their duty to take care of the students' : health conditions and prevent them from miseralbe diseases. (falling ill) : Sitting in the classroom all day long is obviously not a good idea. It would (will) : make students feel tiresome and exhausted. Finally, it would lead to low : efficency learning. If so, only outdoor exercises could reverse the bad ^in (why only?) (can) (undesirable) : situation. These activities could shift the students' focus from books to : what they are doing, like baseball or basketball. Then, the students' could (leisure activities) Hence these students can : relax for a while and restore energy for next class. Taking a deep breath and : stretching their bodies could also promote their memory capability. (enhance) : To sum up, I'm inclined to support the idea that schools should consider both : sport and academic activities together in their class schedule. If schools are : serious toward the learning efficiency, they should take exercises into account (consider physical exercises : , which would contribute well to students meantally and physically. (will) (to the mental and physical well-being of students) -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 222.164.52.87