[寫作班] 托福第46週 qweqweqweqwe 5
很久沒寫了 寫不好還要麻煩請各位版友幫忙
另外我自己也有列出幾個疑問@@ 各位先進們可以幫我解答一下嗎
當然詞彙好像有點貧乏XD
5. Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other
people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you
prefer?
I prefer always in a hurry to go places and get things done than other.
My reasons are as follows.
First of all, living in the hurry tempo in my daily lives, I gain more
pressures(這邊要複數嗎) to let me finish the work more efficiently and
effectively. If people do not suffer from enough pressure to lead to do
things more quickly, it may waste a large amount of time. For example, when I
was a student in college, I tend to finish my jobs as quick(adj or adv?) as I
can. I used to check my jobs again and again until that I thought the best
jobs I’ve did. After that, I can do a lot of things what I want and totally
enjoy my leisure time without any things that may bother me.
Second, it help me gain achievement and kudos. One of the major reasons is
that I always suffer from pressure, so that I can train myself to taste
pressure through trials and errors no matter it is heavy(強大的壓力怎樣形容?
Strong?). I, for one, usually try to limit time to achieve one goal under
pressure which may decrease my failures in the future work. Because if people
always live life at a slower pace, they will suffer from a lot of vital(這邊可
以用vital嗎?沒工作活不下去XD) problems, such as doing jobs ineffective.
Eventually, it will let their abilities to drop down at the moment just
because of they must finish their own work in the limitation of time;
however, if they do not, they will be fired and lose a great number of
advantages in hunting jobs.
Last but not least, to expose themselves under pressure, people can learn
more useful things and gain more experiences from their daily lives. People
can acquire more knowledge when they are in schools and know how to control
their timetable in efficient ways. Not only can it help people do their jobs
systematically, but it also helps them do their jobs more aggressively. So
that living in the high paces, people can gain more beneficial in their daily
lives.
For the reasons above, I prefer to go places and get things done than other.
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