Re: [問題] 新聞類的翻譯

看板translator (翻譯接案)作者hanway (紗之器)時間19年前 (2006/06/06 17:17)推噓1(1推 0噓 3→)

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※ 引述《Europe (extravaganza)》之銘言： : 自己翻翻看一些新聞，但還是覺得很不順，有的也翻不出來 : 似乎該翻得正式一點，請大家指教，謝謝! : (中翻英) : 1. 總之，我們絕不能把國家的前途，完全仰賴於美國的支持， : 更不能把人民的安全，完全寄望於中共能自我節制。 : To sum up, we mustn't have our nation's future entirely : dependent on the full support of the U.S, and neither must : we put people's security under the hope of the Mainland : China's self-restraint. : 問：”我們絕不能．．更不能．．”要怎樣翻比較好？ In conclusion, we must not risk the future of our country by depending fully on american support; nor can we jeopardize the safety of our people by wishing for a self-restraining China. to sum up沒錯但in conclusion或to conclude比較正式。risk和jeopardize 是我自己加的，因為原文雖然沒有明講，但有危及、威脅的意思。 wishing for則是點出中共自我節制是不太可能實現的。 : 2. 游揆強調，中華民國有不得不走出去的壓力，所以這次出訪的目的 : 　是突顯中華民國存在的事實，讓國際看得見台灣。 : Prime Minister Yu emphasized that Taiwan, under pressure, : had no choice but to go out, so the purpose of this visit : was to accentuate the fact of R.O.C's existence, and let : Taiwan be seen internationally. : 問：”不得不走出去的壓力”怎麼翻比較好？ Prime Minister Yu emphasized that Taiwan is under the pressure to reach out internationally, which is exactly the purpose of this trip--highlight the existence of ROC and increase Taiwan's global presence. 後面用破折號感覺重點比較清楚。然後不得不這三個字的確很頭痛，勉強翻的話，我會這麼寫； Taiwan is under the pressure of having no choice but to reach out. -- 個人意見供參考。 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.219.6.98