Re: [問題] 請幫我潤飾一下^^"
: 原文
Combined with [contemporary elements of arches, wrought-iron & terracotta
tiles with light, airy colours, good quality fabrics & subtle lighting,]
offering guests a [totally unique atmosphere not featured elsewhere in
Tropical North Queensland].
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我懷疑toofat的說法，如果這段話的意義如你所解，那麼：
1.＆的位置問題
terracotta tiles的修飾語有兩個--light, airy colours和good quality fabrics
為什麼兩者之間不用＆連接？
2.更重要的意義問題
Combined with
- contemporary elements of
+ arches,
+ wrought-iron &
+ terracotta tiles with light, airy colours,
- good quality fabrics &
- subtle lighting,
offering guests a totally unique atmosphere not featured elsewhere in
Tropical North Queensland.
我傾向把原文做這樣的解讀，並認為這八成是旅館業的廣告，因為
建築風格、織品（包括窗簾、毛巾、寢具等）和光照，都是選擇房間的重點所在。
3.文筆問題
在形容整體風格的文字中，突然細部描寫瓦片的各種優點，閱讀起來不順場，
也讓這段話的重點有些失焦。
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