Re: [寫作班] HIbaby, Liver

看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者 (Dee)時間17年前 (2007/12/11 14:34), 編輯推噓2(200)
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※ 引述《HIbaby (燃燒吧! 嗨~北鼻!)》之銘言: : The adult liver is the largest organ and plays a major xxx, : role in metabolism and has several functions in the body, ^, : including detoxification, plasma protein synthesis and so on. ^, 太多and... and... 改用comma斷開 : The liver consists several types cells that including hepatocytes, ^of xxxx consist of要一起用 : Kupffer cells, hepatic stellate cells, sinusoidal endothelial cells, : and blood cells. On the other hand, fetal liver is a hematopoietic ^the : tissue and acquires metabolic ability with decreasing proliferation, xxx^插入which,或斷句 : becomes a metabolic organ after birth. This dramatic change ^and : triggered by several signal transduction and carrier on specific ^is : transcriptional factors. However, the mechanisms of the regulation : does not understanding very well. is not very well understood. : Thus, to understand the regulatory of gene transcription during understanding ^^^^^^^^^^ 用名詞 regulation, (or regulatory function, regulatory mechanism, etc.) : liver development may provide a good way to discover a new treatment xx : for liver diseases. 或說 "Having a thorough understanding of the regulation..." -- A modern-day warrior, mean mean stride Today's Tom Sawyer, mean mean pride -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 99.231.10.180 ※ 編輯: dvlin 來自: 99.231.10.180 (12/11 15:01)

12/11 17:52, , 1F
真快, 非常感謝..
12/11 17:52, 1F

12/11 17:52, , 2F
Dee, 不知道這樣寫有何缺點?
12/11 17:52, 2F
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