Re: [寫作班]第二週 找工作計畫 mingtai1
看板ST-English (英文科技寫作)作者brendonfish (fish)時間17年前 (2007/11/02 16:41)推噓0(0推 0噓 0→)留言0則, 0人參與討論串3/6 (看更多)
※ 引述《mingtai1 (snake)》之銘言：
: I have been working in an academic institute since my graduation
: two years ago. I majored in computer science, and sometimes I write
^^^^^^^^^這裡使用 sometimes,
會讓我聯想到其他時候你的工作是？
建議寫成 My major is computer science,
therefore I write customized application software
after school.
: applications according to customers' demands. During these days,
: I realized that a person should not have only one skill, and I realized
這樣寫如何呢？ a person with only one skill is not competitive, and ...
建議把這句斷開，然後重新選擇連接詞讓語意連貫。
: the fact that programming cannot be a forever career for me, so I learned
^. Therefore,
: English a lot and took TOEIC exam and hope I would be able to work in
^^^^^^^^^ such that
: foreign companies for my next job and hopefully I can have the opportunities
^. Then I have the opportunities ...
: to work abroad for my company so that I can visit scenic spots
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ and visit ...
: around the world.
個人意見，
給你參考。
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