Re: [寫作班]第二週 找工作計畫 mingtai1
※ 引述《brendonfish (fish)》之銘言：
: ※ 引述《mingtai1 (snake)》之銘言：
: : I have been working in an academic institute since my graduation
: : two years ago. I majored in computer science, and sometimes I write
: ^^^^^^^^^這裡使用 sometimes,
: 會讓我聯想到其他時候你的工作是？
這邊可能容易讓人誤解
I majored in computer science是說我大學主修CS
sometimes I write applications是說現在的工作偶而要寫應用程式
(其他時間是research, read papers). 看來我沒表達好 qq
: 建議寫成 My major is computer science,
: therefore I write customized application software
: after school.
: : applications according to customers' demands. During these days,
: : I realized that a person should not have only one skill, and I realized
hmm 這樣寫比較有力沒錯
: 這樣寫如何呢？ a person with only one skill is not competitive, and ...
: 建議把這句斷開，然後重新選擇連接詞讓語意連貫。
: : the fact that programming cannot be a forever career for me, so I learned
: ^. Therefore,
: : English a lot and took TOEIC exam and hope I would be able to work in
: ^^^^^^^^^ such that
: : foreign companies for my next job and hopefully I can have the opportunities
: ^. Then I have the opportunities ...
: : to work abroad for my company so that I can visit scenic spots
: ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ and visit ...
: : around the world.
: 個人意見，
: 給你參考。
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