[英中] 似是法律用語，但想請教怎麼感覺不通順?

看板Translation (筆譯/翻譯)作者CaffeiEn (愛上咖啡英)時間10年前 (2015/02/08 09:15)推噓1(1推 0噓 0→)

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以下文章聽說是因為一些家海外未上市公司的投資糾紛，是西班牙駐北京大使館的回給投資人的信。但為什麼我覺得怎麼看都很不順暢，還覺得文法上怪異，是因為法律用語嗎? 想請教做過相關領域翻譯的人，這類文章是不是本就該這樣寫? 因為自己對翻譯有興趣，想先自己慢慢找文章試試。 ------------------------------------------------------- I am deep regret, "The Power8" for their business to harm investors, and also reiterate the investors rational to defend their right as forward: 1. The investors should not paid listing fees Because investors have already invested "The Power8", therefore, all companies operating expenses by business spending. If the enterprise to release the name of the listing of the shares of fund-raising, of course, is another matter, do not confuse the different types of fund-raising, harm the harmonious relationship between the investor and the enterprise! 2. The request must be involved in the listing should not be one-sided The reason why investors invest Power8, Power8 arrangement is based on the information provided with, not to participate in the benefits listed, Power8 is a good thing to be listed, investors must also look at the positive, but there is still no power to unilaterally Power8 require all shareholders to be listed, this original fundraising appeal are different. 3. It must have cash repayment plan For investors who do not participate in the listing, will lose all the investment area, which is extremely unreasonable demands! This should not need to do more to explain, do not pay listing fees, they will lose all of the investment, and only a week's time so that investors ready "Power8 unilaterally and without warning, and never appeared in the text of the agreement to charge listing fees ", The Power8's behavior legitimacy it? 4. There is no listing plan description "The Power8" never provided any explanation listing plan, ask questions not reply, ask investors to judge how to invest, this time also required by law to pay the listing fee, ask reasonable? Described above investor demands legitimacy 1. The shareholders do not participate in the market, should be returned to the capital stock of its stake! 2. The cash will be allowed within the misappropriation of shareholders to subscribe for equity account! 3. The listing fees 13.5%, operating expenses by the company should not charge extra for the shareholders! Please face the questions ~ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 220.136.11.200 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Translation/M.1423358136.A.200.html