Fw: [翻譯] 快板 (Allegro by Tomas Transtromer)

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※ [本文轉錄自 poem 看板 #1L_CRX7D ] 作者: kaifrankwind (大師兄) 看板: poem 標題: [翻譯] 快板 (Allegro by Tomas Transtromer) 時間: Sat Sep 19 10:22:22 2015 結束了黑色的一天，我總彈奏海頓雙手可以感受簡單的溫暖琴鍵已待妥，琴槌徐緩落下那聲響青澀、活潑，又富滿靜謐它說：自由存在而某人不願向帝王納稅我把手插進我的海頓口袋表現得像是我冷眼看待一切我舉起我的海頓旗，訊息是：「我們不會退卻，但是想要和平」音樂是一棟坡上的玻璃房石頭在飛，石頭在滾群群滾石筆直穿越然而每一面玻璃完整無損－－－－－註一：本篇為個人嘗試，譯自Robin Fulton與Robert Bly二人的英譯。還請不吝賜教。註二：http://goo.gl/Xj1scD　原文（瑞典文）註三：http://goo.gl/W0zdGI　Robin Fulton之譯本註四：https://goo.gl/FMn1OP　托馬斯朗誦原詩搭配個人鋼琴演奏，底下回覆有Robert Bly之譯本。－－－－－ Robin Fulton's translation: I play Haydn after a black day and feel a simple warmth in my hands. The keys are willing. Soft hammers strike. The resonance green, lively and calm. The music says freedom exists and someone doesn't pay the emperor tax. I push down my hands in my Haydnpockets and imitate a person looking on the world calmly. I hoist the Haydnflag - it signifies: "We don't give in. But want peace.' The music is a glass-house on the slope where the stones fly, the stones roll. And the stones roll right through but each pane stays whole. Robert Bly's translation: After a black day, I play Haydn, and feel a little warmth in my hands. The keys are ready. Kind hammers fall. The sound is spirited, green, and full of silence. The sound says that freedom exists and someone pays no tax to Caesar. I shove my hands in my haydnpockets and act like a man who is calm about it all. I raise my haydnflag. The signal is: "We do not surrender. But want peace." The music is a house of glass standing on a slope; rocks are flying, rocks are rolling. The rocks roll straight through the house but every pane of glass is still whole. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 111.243.243.187 ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/poem/M.1442629345.A.1CD.html ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ※ 轉錄者: kaifrankwind (111.243.243.187), 09/19/2015 10:27:45 ※ 編輯: kaifrankwind (111.243.243.187), 09/19/2015 10:34:40

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