[試譯] 夜雨寄北
When I return, if ever, my love----
Nightly rains fill autumn ponds----
We'll reminisce by candlelight,
In bed, of nightly rains so long.
君問歸期未有期
巴山夜雨漲秋池
何當共剪西窗燭
卻話巴山夜雨時
無聊的時候隨便想的，歡迎大家給點意見吧！
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英詩板 poetry
大老婆板 first-wife
第二者板 multi-lovers
第三者板 third-person
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囧已修正，感謝！
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這牽扯到一些文化背景的問題，中國人都知道巴山在四川而四川不容易進出，於是賦予這
首詩更濃郁的相思；不過用英文表達要寫什麼？Alaska？那裡有秋季夜雨嗎？
更何況我塞不進去orz
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Fixed, thanks!
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You can tell from my free verse that this is a liberal translation.
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