[英中] 發揮想像力的翻譯
各位達人好
目前我是正在翻譯旅遊廣告的學生
老師跟我說要發揮想像力 把文章改成吸引人的內容
我是想到兩個方案如下
不過
哪個方案比較吸引各位呢?
ADD-ON FLIGHTS
Add-ons are the best (kinda like fries with your burger or fresh lime in your
vodka). They let you get to
pretty much anywhere in the world you want to go by simply adding on one of
our unique sector fares
(a one way or return flight added onto your international flight). Doing this
means more gallivanting
beyond the arrival at your international flight. If we really need to
convince you, just think about how cool
hopping over to Borneo to meet some orangutans would be after you’ve learned
to cook some delicious
Thai food in Chiang Mai and partied on some of Malaysia’s pristine beaches!
附加機票
最佳的選擇 類似薯條搭配漢堡或是奶茶搭配珍珠,只要附加上我們獨家提供的此項服務
的費用(在您的國際機票上附加單程或往返),您幾乎就可以到達世界的每一個角落,這
意味著在您的國際飛航中有更多樂子,我們要怎樣才能說服您呢? 想像一下
1.早上在希臘愛琴海上島嶼浮潛, 晚上在埃及荒漠上與駱駝入眠
2.早上在長灘島浮潛後, 中午至尖沙咀享用港式飲茶,入夜後到泰國輕鬆SPA
那將會是多酷炫壓!
希望大家幫忙批評指教
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